That isn't something to apologize for. So, you'd like to rework it entirely? Then perhaps it truly was fate that held us back...

[He lifts himself just slightly, and even if he's frail and hurt, it looks like he's able to hold himself up like this, hair slightly in his face, looking down at Wataru.]

Was there an image you had in mind? Since we're a two-person unit, I'll value your input fully, of course.