Ah... I think so, too. A song with this energy will wake the crowd that's likely expecting you to blend in seamlessly with the prior image of fine, as well. I'm looking forward to it.
[Wataru is as attractive as always, but this time, Eichi isn't dealing with bitter anger in the way of his admiration. It's pure beauty, and he gets to press so close to it. He's more and more thankful every moment for the direction they've taken this.
And he feels alive! Even if he's feeling a little dizzy right now from how excited he's getting, watching Wataru's back as he goes to get water. Ah. He's fine, he's fine, and by the time Wataru is looking back, Eichi is pointedly facing elsewhere and running his hand through his hair to try and cool down.]
I think this may be the final edit, this time. I can't think of any changes that would improve on this for now, at the very least. We should try it once more, to be certain.
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[Wataru is as attractive as always, but this time, Eichi isn't dealing with bitter anger in the way of his admiration. It's pure beauty, and he gets to press so close to it. He's more and more thankful every moment for the direction they've taken this.
And he feels alive! Even if he's feeling a little dizzy right now from how excited he's getting, watching Wataru's back as he goes to get water. Ah. He's fine, he's fine, and by the time Wataru is looking back, Eichi is pointedly facing elsewhere and running his hand through his hair to try and cool down.]
I think this may be the final edit, this time. I can't think of any changes that would improve on this for now, at the very least. We should try it once more, to be certain.